All of these are great, enjoyed them since the beggining and this one was rather amusing also. They're a great for anyone who needs a quick little pick me up. Keep 'em coming.
Perhaps make them a tad longer and maybe you could mess around with colour, not to ruin it but for story effect.
Keep up the good work.
Perhaps its just my sense of humor but...
Honestly... I don't really get these.
They're not very funny to me...
Not bad animation though, i just think you need to work on the humor.
Pretty good though.
Not really like mac vs pc ads but its...
Not Bad, But perhaps work on your voice acting for the next ones.
You are truly a talented Animator. The artwork was stunning, the lighting and visuals blended in very nicely with the music.The Animation was smooth also.
Perhaps one day i could produce something like that!
Looking forward to seeing more of your work. Keep it up!
Nice little short.
Its pretty nice, i like the sound effects.
For a little short it's rather smooth as well.
Keep up the good work.
Perhaps we can see something a bit longer next time?
Thanks! Take a look at my other work. Am posting a new, six minute piece tomorrow. You will like.
Was better than my first stuff...
Its a nice little loop i can imagine going on at a kiosk or presentation or something.
The style is good and drawings are good too.
I suggest you learn how to add sounds and stuff, theres probably some tutorials lying around somewhere on the portal and check out www.findsounds.com for sound effects.
Also for improvement on the drawings - i noticed shading in some shots, the best stuff on the portal tends to work around lighting nicely, so think about shading realisticly and perhaps add more next time.
Overall though its amazing for a newbie and i suggest you keep at it because i can spot some potential for perhaps a good little cartoon series or something.
Good Luck =)
Good idea but...Work on some things...
Don't release the full thing at this quality. You will fail if you do.
I liked the idea of it but I'll give you a few tips for when you realease the full movie.
Work on the scenes and lighting - Shade your backgrounds, it gives them depth and detail. Maybe add some foreground and effects.
Animate - Don't just use static images and text. Make your characters move, Take a look at some of the other popular stick animations on the portal. If you don't want to animate them walking you could shoot all the walking shots as close ups, and jump them up and down. Scrolling the background. This way it still looks like they're walking.
Text - Perhaps use different fonts for each colour, and use textboxes rather than just having it randomly floating. You can design the text boxes to look cool.
If your making an action movie, you might want camera effects. These can easily be achieved by making your movie scene slightly larger than the canvas on flash, and then when a shot is fired. Jolt the whole scene around.
Use overlay's to lighten or darken the mood. If its a dark alley use a black overlay(Alpha it to about 30%).
Just think about it realisticly. Animations that are realistic in the sense of direction are the ones that succeed the most. Put effort into it and you'll do alot better.
Looking forward to the final project.
That was incredibly funny, enjoyed the lighting effects used, added a real atmosphere. But overall very funny. Nice One!
A little short.
But the graphics make up for it. Good one.
yeah i know that was short, but im full now of work and i only have free time for shitting and eating :(
Haha nice one
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